"Deaths colors were dark" I can relate to deaths colors because my favorite colors are dark. When i try to hide my emotions i feel like a dark cloud is around me cuz i keep them bottled up inside me and dont let them out. i walk around feeling black and blue sometimes because of life. I have a good heart like death also i try and help people and not let them get into bad situations. Death always had dark colors around him and always was going to help somebody. Then at the begining of the book he told us about the colors red whit and black for the flag with the swastica. Usually when death comes around the people die but when death comes around Leisle he keeps her around and keeps an eye on her. So i can relate to deaths colors and emotions.
Works Cited:
Zusak, Markus. The Book Thief. NY: Alfred A. Knopf, 2005. Print.
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ReplyDeleteContent: I really like how you compare hiding your emotions to a dark cloud. As a reader, I knew exactly what you meant.
Can you clarify this sentence? "Usually when death comes around they die but when comes around Leisle he keeps her around and keeps an eye on her." In your blog, you really want to be specific so that your reader can understand exactly what you are referring to or what you mean.
Comments for revision:
Be sure to use apostrophes for contractions or when you need to show possesion--ex: "Death's colors were dark."
Be sure to always capitalize proper nouns and the first word of every sentence. You should always capitalize "I" "I've" "I'm," etc...
Run-on: "I have a good heart like death also i try and help people and not let them get into bad situations."
Again, be sure to spell check!